When one’s hands are tied,
Passions skill deficient
When nothing’s left untried
Yet nothing produced sufficient
Attempted flee from mundane
Thirsting for the poetic
but all that’s found is inane
merely fancy rhetoric
What shall become of thee?
Dreamer lacking aptitude
He who seeks but cannot see
All’s needed, a slack attitude
Lofty concepts not permitted
Write whatever can be fitted
Passions skill deficient
When nothing’s left untried
Yet nothing produced sufficient
Attempted flee from mundane
Thirsting for the poetic
but all that’s found is inane
merely fancy rhetoric
What shall become of thee?
Dreamer lacking aptitude
He who seeks but cannot see
All’s needed, a slack attitude
Lofty concepts not permitted
Write whatever can be fitted
6 comments:
ok ok you really did not have anything to write about right???
well... you still wrote a really great sonnet! (i was about to post mine but after i read yours let's just say i had second thoughts..yes yes your sonnet is THAT good) ;)
hani, despite the fact that you NEVER use proper punctuation (ha ha :P) you amaze me, on a regular bases, with your fluency in writing and your "aptitude". my favorite so far..i applaud you!
it's brief, follows the standard form of writing sonnets and is handled with very much adeptness.
you make us HL English students proud =)
hani all i can say is that i agree with aya:) i wish i was in HL with you guys, the 3rd stanza was my fav. bravo !
p.s fix the punctuation just like aya said two, and itll rock:)
TWO THUMBS UP! ! ! !
if i were a cow i would probably not have been able to create such words in such a limited form
so... im better than a cow?
Good job Hani, unlike the other comments I will applaude you for your work.It is not that easy creating a sonnet for your first time.
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